The interpreted ideas of the architecture and representations are appropriate and the conceptual standpoint is strong, but they were not clearly communicated in your montage.
The graphic design is unattractive. The lines in the background of both montages are distracting. The ‘grid’ on the first layout is uneven and not aligned. This grid could have been expressed more subtlety. For example, overlaying the grid lines of your digital model, similar to the examples I posted in the course blog.
Unsatisfactory representation of digital model. The ‘render’ on the first poster appears to be a Max screenshot, whilst the render on the second poster is a basic clay render of the model. No textures or post editing techniques were employed.
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ReplyDeleteThe interpreted ideas of the architecture and representations are appropriate and the conceptual standpoint is strong, but they were not clearly communicated in your montage.
The graphic design is unattractive. The lines in the background of both montages are distracting. The ‘grid’ on the first layout is uneven and not aligned. This grid could have been expressed more subtlety. For example, overlaying the grid lines of your digital model, similar to the examples I posted in the course blog.
Unsatisfactory representation of digital model. The ‘render’ on the first poster appears to be a Max screenshot, whilst the render on the second poster is a basic clay render of the model. No textures or post editing techniques were employed.